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2014雅思作文考试题目及其范文
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 2014年1月9日雅思A类大作文题目:

  The best way for the government to solve the traffic congestion problems in cities is to provide free transport 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?   对于政府而言解决交通城市最好的方式是提供每周七天,一天二十四小时的免费的交通. 多大程度上同意或者不同意?

2014年1月9日雅思A类大作文范文:

  第一段: 社会背景描述+ 正向/ 反向观点+ 自己观点

  社会背景: government , traffic congestion + 正向观点:理想策略---完全免费交通 +自己观点:1 提升基础设施2优化公共交通

  The increasingly congested traffic in metropolises has perplexed the government for long. Some individuals deem that the ideal strategy to tackle such issue is to provide completely free public transportation. On the contrary, I deem that the available approaches to cope with such issue should include infrastructure upgrading and public transportation enhancement. =52

  第二段: 论点+论据+例证+结论

  论点:合理规划道路与城市建设的布局+ 论据:合理长期规划---起根本作用 +例证:北京交通现状+ 结论:此做法优势凸显

  First and foremost, the key solution is the reasonable planning of roads and layout of urban construction. In other words, without rational and long-range planning especially in conurbations, overcrowded transportation would fail to be worked out fundamentally. For instance, during the rapid development of urbanization, Beijing lacks rational and impeccable infrastructure of roadways and scientific road design, which give rise to serious traffic congestion, especially during rush hours. Hence, the superiority of such practice is prominent.

  第三段: 论点+论据+例证+结论

  论点:提升公共交通 + 论据: 公交不便--- 驾驶私家车---交通拥挤 +例证:等车+拥挤状况 ----浪费时间+丧失舒适度

  结论:改善现有交通状况是必要的

  Secondly, to upgrade public transportation services is another valid approach. Conspicuously, the inconvenience of the public traffic system compels people to drive private cars, which cannot shirk its responsibility of escalating traffic jams. For instance, the long wait time for buses or metros and the thronging situations on them mean a huge waste of time and sacrifice of comfort to commuters, pushing some of them to commute in their own vehicles, a key factor to the formation of such status. Therefore, it is essential to improve the current transportation system. =90

  第四段:让步段:另一种观点合理性+对此观点反驳

  另一种观点:全天候免费公交---合理 1 节省人们日常交通费用 2 便利公益服务

  反驳观点:此做法不切合实际 1 造成政府财政负担 2 阻碍交通运营的维护以及监管

  Admittedly, round-the-clock free charge of public transportation has its own rationality. Not only will it save the traffic expenses of people in their daily life, but it will also become a convenient public service. However, such practice is impractical, in view of aggravating the financial burden on the authority and due to the shortage of funds hindering the maintenance and supervision of transportation operations which can induce the traffic accidence.=70

  第五段总结段:总结观点+ 提出建议

  总结观点:支撑观点1 道路基础设施改善 2 交通系统改进 + 提出建议: 政府与市民积极合作

  In brief, the upgrading of road infrastructures and improvement of the traffic system are the key to settling congestion in roads. Meanwhile, vigorous coordination between the government and citizens is also conducive to alleviating deteriorating road situations.

                                                                                                              摘自:环球雅思      http://ielts.gedu.org/p/13750-1.html

 

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